Alternate Chapter 22 Savannah Run

Books change as they are created. And for me, that was absolutely true for my first novel Savannah Run. Chapter 22 underwent a huge evolution thanks to my editor and a few glasses of wine.
Let me know what you think, I know I like Janet Heinz from WITSEC a lot more than what I tried first. -Michelle Donn
Please forgive any typos or other mistakes this was never professionally edited. It’s just a fun glimpse into how a book gets written.